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Offline Xero

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Azrael Batman sprite
« on: October 27, 2009, 04:37:08 PM »
For a long time I've been a mugen fan (more of DC and marvel) and I always wanted to make a character, but every time I was sure of making one there was one already in a possible wip, so I just made sprites. I'm not a good spriter I'm just do my best, but somehow I don't feel confortable with some sprites. Well now I bring you Azrael Batman in his batsuit. Let me know what you guys think and if it all goes well this character might be a possible wip.
« Last Edit: October 27, 2009, 04:39:34 PM by The Ultimate »

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Re: Azrael Batman sprite
« Reply #1 on: October 27, 2009, 05:09:12 PM »
a good start but a little rough overall. I'd redo the wings/cape and reexamine some of the metal attachments. Also try and make the ears a bit perkier.
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Re: Azrael Batman sprite
« Reply #2 on: October 27, 2009, 11:57:47 PM »
Nice start but the muscle lines on his body need to be re done :)

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Re: Azrael Batman sprite
« Reply #3 on: October 28, 2009, 01:49:48 PM »
thank you for youre comments. I think I need a lot of help with the cape and I'll see if I can fix the sprite a bit more.

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Re: Azrael Batman sprite
« Reply #4 on: October 28, 2009, 02:26:09 PM »
I updated his suit a bit and removed the cape for now. I added a more darker tone on certain parts and fixed some stuff such as the equipment. Tell me what you think.

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Re: Azrael Batman sprite
« Reply #5 on: October 28, 2009, 04:56:46 PM »
the chest plate is wrong. that is supposed to be part of the cape. also his helmet needs work to look right. It looks kinda squashed atm.

try using a direct reference.

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Re: Azrael Batman sprite
« Reply #6 on: November 06, 2009, 10:10:24 AM »
Everything needs to be re-defined... everything seems blotchy as if it were rendered from high quality to low quality back and forth a few times.
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Re: Azrael Batman sprite
« Reply #7 on: November 14, 2009, 08:50:14 PM »
Re-do the limbs and it will look great =3
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Re: Azrael Batman sprite
« Reply #8 on: November 25, 2009, 04:11:19 PM »
ok so, I manage to take another shot at the cape, but now I made a different pose cause the one I had was not quite good enough. I corrected some errors although I see I still need more training. Well, I think I will leave this character alone cause I feel I'm not good for it. Here is the last shot I will give at Batman Azrael and thank you all for the tips and comments.


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Re: Azrael Batman sprite
« Reply #9 on: November 25, 2009, 04:28:19 PM »
That one is way better!!! You could even lighten the darkest colors a bit to blend better. Or even darken the light colors a bit.

Other than that little thing, he looks awesome now!!!
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Re: Azrael Batman sprite
« Reply #10 on: November 26, 2009, 12:01:41 AM »
Muscle definition and custom stuff looks a thousand times better now keep improving like that

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Re: Azrael Batman sprite
« Reply #11 on: November 26, 2009, 01:16:58 PM »
looks great but if you look at the picture you made him too muscly
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Re: Azrael Batman sprite
« Reply #12 on: December 10, 2009, 05:39:55 PM »
It would be interesting if he used the fighting style of Captain Commando.

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